Thursday, 12 May 2016
lonely shoe
“Lonely, lonely, lonely shoe thrown in a bin abandoned in an alleyway”. A lonely shoe hearing cars ZOOM past, going so fast. The lonely shoe relished on some rubbish. That lonely shoe having nothing else to eat. Socing wet, as rain filled the bottom of the inside of me. Lonely shoe having nothing to see, black all around no way no how to flee.
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A very good try at painting a clear picture with words Lyndon. Remember for this task you were pretending to be the shoes so you would use words like 'I feel...', 'I could hear...'
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